re: super clever lyrics
Posted by: Chromolume 07:54 pm EDT 10/09/24
In reply to: super clever lyrics - sc2 11:55 am EDT 10/08/24

One of my very favorite lyrics is the whole of the song "She Loves Me." It's a really clever song in general. But here are a few spots I think are particularly wonderful.

The verse and the refrain share an "overlapping" device, where one lyric literally feeds another. In the verse, we get:
"I didn't like her!
Didn't like her? I couldn't stand her
Couldn't stand her? I wouldn't have her!"

And later in the refrain we get:
"I love her, isn't that a wonder?
I wonder why I didn't want her.
I want her, that's the thing that matters,
And matters are improving daily."

And then there's the section where Harnick delights in exploring/debunking the cliches of falling in love (and remember that we're less than 2 weeks to Christmas, and he's singing this outside):
"I'm tingling such delicious tingles,
I'm trembling - what the hell does that mean?
I'm freezing -- that's because it's cold out."

Which is followed by an inspired few lines:
"But still I'm incandescent
And like some adolescent
I'd like to scrawl on ev'ry wall I see!"

Last but not least, going all the way back to the wonderfully tongue-tied "well well well" beginning, which is followed by a phrase we not coincidentally just heard Amalia sing in "Ice Cream":
"Well! Well! Well! Well! Well!
Well! Well! Well! Well! Well!
Will wonders never cease?"

I should also note that in the score, it calls for Amalia to say "Well, well, well" at the end of "Ice Cream" - which I've never heard anyone do, because the timing of that with the applause would seem too awkward. But it's interesting to see that's what the original intention was.
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